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PostSubject: Doragon Aruji   Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:24 pm

Name: Doragon Aruji
Nickname: dont have one
Age: 20
Species:elf
Gender: Male
Height: 200cm
Weight: 170 lbs
Reputation: 0
Class: D
Affiliation: Neutral

Physical Description: blonde hair,blue eyes,and other items
Clothing: a black vest and black pants and shoulder pads
Accessories:shoulder pads
Extra: some tattos that are flames
Picture:
Spoiler: http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif

Personality: Doragon is a strong-willed warrior,he uses a sword for fight but is also a good fist fighter.He belives in wat is right to him and follows that.Doragon knows when to stop a fight but wont stop because the chances of winning are low.Doragon will try all he can to acomplish his duties and always finds a way to finish the job even if it doesnt exactly follows orders Smile

History: Doragon grew up with elves.They taught him how to fight and evade.They taught him the natures ways and how to talk to all of the animals there are,and how to mix the languages of 2 animals so he could speak with new hybrids.He has become a warrior that is one with everything.Once he turned 14 he started traveling.His katana was made by a black smith he knew as a kid when he was 12.But one unfateful day he went for a walk and hung out with the animals when he came back it turns out that the town was raided,he ran to ask questions and check on his friends but there parents were just sitting there in shock they told me that the bandits were raiding and they tried to escape but my friends stood tall and blocked the way but the bandits killed them and ran away.As soon as he could use magic he trained everyday using magic and soon he could fuse it with his sword.For 6 years he had joined a town,but he didnt get married,he got a house at 18 and became a warrior for the town.One day he realized that his town was messed up by the age 20 or a few weeks ago so he decided to travel once again to find a good town to live in.

Weaponry:Rank D A katana

http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif


Stats - 45
Strength:12
Accuracy:10
Stamina:6
Speed:5
Magic:6(12)

Stat Points Earned: 0/0
Scales Earned 100,000/100,000

Sources


Magic Name:Fire Magic
Magic Tier: 2
Magic Type: Fire
Rank: 1
Magic Description:Doragon uses fire against his enemy to attack.this may the effect of burning your enemy(5%)it might miss(25%)
Techniques: 1/2

Fire ball
Type: Offensive
Range: 30 m
Effect: Doragon shoot a fire ball i might burn the enemy(10%)or it might miss(20%)
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House: [Starting players don't own]
Companion: [Monster who is traveling with you. It costs and must be registered before under "Monster Creation"]

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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Aruji   Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:20 am

No human/elf, just choose one.
Are you really 100cm tall? You would be a midget then....

Remove that "My character" thingy and switch it with a name in personality and history. Also change I's to he's since Role Playing here works in 3rd Person.

History; No, rewrite it, you can't grow up with Dragons and that's that.

Add "Rank-D" behind your weapon.



Magic isn't thing like "Fireball". It is like "Healing Magic", "Fire Magic" etc.
Techniques will be 2/2 not how many times he can use it since that amount increases with stamina.

Techniques are only magic based... there is no need to register some kind of sword slices as your character can just preform them...

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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Aruji   Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:03 pm

ok im pretty sure im finished
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Aruji   Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:33 pm

You should really fix your height. 100 cm is like, 3 ft.

Specify exact range for Fireball in feet or meters.

Everything else looks fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Aruji   Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:59 pm

You still are using "My Character" in your history and personality. We've already told you to switch to third person.

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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Aruji   Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:32 pm

ok now i think i am(plz be correct)
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Aruji   Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:14 am

I've set your Fireball range to 30 meters, if you have objections, PM.

Other than that, approved.

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