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PostSubject: Zarora Elric   Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:06 am

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Name: Zarora Elric
Nickname: Currently No
Age: 16
Race: Werewolf
Gender:male
Height: 158 cm
Weight: 51 kg
Reputation: 0
Class: D
Affiliation: light-dark [read on]

Physical Description:
Clothing:
Costume 1- the top he is wearing in pic with black leather pants,
Costume 2- Ocean Blue t shirt with Deep blue jeans, fingerless gloves
Costume 3- Gloves, Blue Hoodies with long sleeves,Black jeans and red shoes
Accessories: in pic
Extra: in pic
Picture:

Human Form
Spoiler:
 

Werewolf Form
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Personality
Wants to be friendly but.... [history]
Once he makes a friend, though his dream and destiny to take revenge on the world [read history],
he cant help being friendly and keeping them as something or someone very important to him, and can't help controlling his anger about his family either...
Each full moon night, he visits an old shed, to make sure he doesn't hurt anyone

History
His family cursed by his father, a dark lord, for all of them to die, but Zarora, who was cursed turn into a werewolf, since he was only 6 in age, since then, everyone feared him and he had to live a lonely life, he vowed revenge from that day, for people not to understand him, and for his father who caused the trouble, he had his only friend, named Zuruki, who suffered from almost the same disease, for that his family was murdered by his vampire brother, and Zuruki himself was a vampire too, and was killed by his brother when Zuruki challenged him to death
that was Zarora's last time he had a friend, from that day, he almost wanted to kill himself, though he lives on, suffering from all he got and vowing revenge....

Weaponry
Katana- 1 Gold in Color Katana, given as a gist from his old friend Zuruki before he went to fight his brother, and Zarora not knowing Zuruki was going for his brother
The Golden katana has extreme sharpness, enough to slice rocks, though Zarora has yet to master the weapon


Stats - 48
Strength:8
Accuracy:6
Stamina:5
Speed:20
Magic:3

Stat Points Earned: 3/3
Scales Earned 100,000/100,000

Sources

Meeting [Kai & Zarora & Lunar] - 3 SP

Magic Name: Wind Control
Magic Tier: 2
Magic Type: Wind
Rank: 1
Magic Description: Allows the user who activates this to have control over the wind. At first the control isn't very strong and the user can't make very strong attacks but like with any other magic it increases over time.

Techniques: (1/2)


Sonic Boom - 1
Type:Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Effect: When normal, a blow with hands, one silver circle-like energy heads to opponent, when werewolf, this happens as the it howls, basically explained as making the air spin in circles, and shoot em. At first Sonic Boom can only make minor cuts to opponent and moves with middle speed but it increases after time, lastly even able to cut trough stone, maybe even steel.

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PostSubject: Re: Zarora Elric   Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:18 am

Because your picture isn't full body you need to write clothing, body build and those kind of things since we don't know what kind of pants, boots and those kind of things you wear. Also since you are werewolf you must write how your werewolf form looks like under body description.

Either choose swords or katanas. Also name how many you have them, 2 are maximum since your magic isn't based on weapons. No guns to anyone. Magical Powers isn't a weapon so remove it. Every race has ability to use magic.

Your stats are also little wrong. Every point you put into magic stat it takes 2 SP so if you want your magic stat to be 4 you need to put 8 points in it.

You can only have 1 Magic at the beginning so you either choose Barrier, Blow or Sonic Boom.

Later when you make techniques you can make 2 of them, both are rank 1 (written next to name). Your technique rank can't be 0 as 1 is minimum and 20 No way in the beginning.




Just a little note, the Magic is like one huge form of magic. So if your magic should be Barrier then your techniques should be based on the barrier magic. So basically You can't make barriers with barrier magic alone, you must have techniques to make barriers so "Basic Blow", "Barrier" and "Sonic Wave" doesn't do a thing if you don't have techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Zarora Elric   Fri Jun 11, 2010 1:32 am

Done, ALL DONE
hows it now?
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PostSubject: Re: Zarora Elric   Fri Jun 11, 2010 1:56 am

Under the magic where techniques are put (The number of techniques you have/2)

I am still not happy with your Techniques.

You don't need to register your combos and any physical attacks which doesn't include magic. The sonic boom in the end still makes it pointless to register as after you have done your punches, kicks etc you can just use it... so yeah no need to register it. Same with Werewolf Combo.

Zarora style combo is a no.

You need to register a technique like "Sonic Slice" or something like that which includes creating your sonic boom. As I said earlier the magic itself doesn't let you use techniques. Look at Luna's Application for a little example. As you can see her magic is Fire Controller. She made a technique with the same name, otherwise she wouldn't have been able to use the magic.

This kind of system is quite useless with magic types like "Sonic Boom", "Fire Controller", "Beast Take Over" but it will serve useful with magic like "Lightning Magic" where user must create multiple technique like Lightning Bolt, Lightning Roar etc.


Hope I made myself clear this time.
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PostSubject: Re: Zarora Elric   Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:08 am

NOW? am guessing ur sick of me Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Zarora Elric   Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:21 am

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